Icy Silence

Icy Silence: Setting

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Memories of winter storms, snowbound homes, and inaccessible roads came to mind when I sat down to write Icy Silence, book 3 in the Megan Scott/Michael Elliott Mystery series. With so many images to draw from, it was easy to paint the weather as a formidable adversary in the story.

An isolated private collage school during an ice storm offered the perfect setting for Icy Silence—one that I created based on the actual 1998 Canadian ice storm that affected millions of people and killed dozens. The massive storm system damaged ice-encrusted trees, buildings, and electrical infrastructure, and resulted in widespread power outages and road closures. Lasting up to several weeks in some areas, it meant no communication with the outside world and limited means of travel in Ontario, Quebec, and the Maritimes, and New York and Maine in the US.

In Icy Silence, Megan and Michael visit the fictitious Verdell College School located in a rural area about an hour’s drive from the closest city. They’re prevented from leaving the next day when the ice storm hits. That teens from affluent families attend the elite boarding school exacerbates the situation once everyone realizes their cell phones no longer work. And if they thought that was bad...

In a previous blog, I highlighted the cascading events that led to a “do or die” situation at Verdell College School: lack of heat and electricity, shortage of food and water, and no help from the outside world. Not to mention two dead students and an elusive murderer in their midst!

Here are several passages from the viewpoint of main character Megan Scott as she describes the ongoing storm effects: 

“Clusters of majestic fir trees lined the road, their branches glistening with ice as they huddled against the biting wind.”

“A thunderous crash outdoors startled me, and I ran to the window. Branches of a gigantic maple tree had split off and fallen, blocking the road in front of the dorm... I slipped under the covers and finally fell asleep to the rhythmic sound of ice pellets hitting the window.”

“Long spikes of ice dangled from towering tree branches and threatened to fall at any moment. I steered clear and walked along a narrow path between the trees, taking care to avoid shards of ice scattered on the ground.”

“Even the hazy light entering the ice-frosted windows couldn’t soften the students’ anxious expressions as they huddled in groups in the atrium... With little food and no heat, Verdell was fast approaching a desperate situation.”

Here’s a peek at another setting in Icy Silence—one that is no less daunting—as Megan discovers an abandoned mine beneath the private school:

“Seconds later I heard a sound above me.

What was that? A bird?

Impossible. Birds don’t live in abandoned mines this far below ground.

Clicking sounds.

Crickets?

A beam aimed at the ceiling revealed the source.

Bats in hibernation. Hundreds—maybe thousands—of them bunched on the ceiling and walls.”

Icy Silence has received favorable reviews, including a five-star review from Readers’ Favorite, a professional book review site. If you haven’t yet read it, visit my Books page to find out where you can get your copy.

Opening Paragraphs

There are countless articles on how to write the opening paragraphs of a story. To sum it up, the opening paragraphs should hook or invite the reader to visit the world of the story. The imagery conveyed should paint a picture that stirs a reader’s curiosity, wonder, and emotions.

I’m all for achieving effect, so I’ll spend time revising the opening paragraphs until I’m satisfied that the reader will want to read more. I say satisfied because there are umpteen ways to begin a story—time permitting. Seeing that authors have their own writing styles and preferences, the decision regarding the content can also be quite subjective. I prefer to keep it simple and set the tone of the story as best I can in the first paragraphs.

If you haven’t yet read my work, here are excerpts from the opening paragraphs of my first three novels in the Megan Scott/Michael Elliott Mystery series as told from Megan’s point of view:

“If I’d known I would be visiting the morgue just weeks after I saw my husband sitting with Pam at Pueblo’s Café, I’d have gone over to say hello that sunny Monday afternoon in July and maybe change destiny. But I was late for a five o’clock appointment.” (False Impressions – Book #1)

“There were times when I wished I could change the future. This was one of them. The cheerful family atmosphere around the kitchen table obscured the sequence of ominous events about to unfold, and I couldn’t do a thing about it.” (Fatal Whispers – Book #2)

“Our windshield wipers were losing the battle in fending off the barrage of ice pellets… The weather amplified the hesitation I’d had about taking this trip… It was a picturesque scene but a threatening one should temperatures plunge and the sudden storm intensify as weather forecasters now predicted. I cringed with the realization that we’d be spending the next two nights here.” (Icy Silence – Book #3)

As I mentioned in an earlier post, I’m currently working on Dark Deeds, my next book in the mystery series. I can’t reveal too many details, though I can tell you that the story involves the hunt for an infamous killer in a decades-old cold case. I’ll have more information in next month’s blog post. Stay tuned!

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Cozy Covers

If you’ve ever experienced the frostiness of winter, you can appreciate the coziness that the photo in this post generates. It’s no wonder that on this snowy January day I’m bundled in a warm comforter while I tap away on my keyboard.

I have news: I’m working on Book 4 in the Megan Scott/Michael Elliott Mystery series. It will include the usual murder (or murders), suspects, witnesses, and whatever else I decide to throw into the “plot” to spice up the storyline. More on this later!

In the meantime, I’d like to share a passage from Icy Silence that captures the mood of this latest mystery novel in the series. In it, Megan is a weekend guest at a private college school located miles from the nearest city. She describes the ice storm that has isolated her and everyone else on campus from the rest of the world.

“I gazed out the window to survey the damage. The icy silence on campus was deceiving. Tree branches had expanded with ice overnight and intertwined their frosty tentacles with those of neighboring trees. Sheets of ice had slid off rooftops and shattered into jagged shards on impact. The campus was strewn with broken branches and debris, a testament to the damage such a storm can inflict and to the challenges facing the school in days ahead. Even in the aftermath of a destructive path, the tempest showed no sign of abandoning its hold.”

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